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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Yay, Severus' point of view! I think this would have to be favourite of his POV's so far - I love seeing into the world of the Death Eaters during the first war, and you write all the tension and challenges so well! And Severus' friends really are a nasty bunch - I really liked how Severus managed to get one up over Carrow though, who has always seemed rather dim-witted, and of course we know that Severus is extremely intelligent and cunning!

The whole Vertiserum bit was very well written, and an amazing idea! I never thought that you'd be able to resist it, but then I guess Harry was able to resist the Imperius Curse - and we know that Severus has strong willpower, as he is a good Occlumens and all that, so this makes perfect sense! And his worst memory has changed! Oh, and his Patronus! Wow! A Thestral!

Can you tell by my very short and un-descriptive sentences that I enjoyed this chapter? if you can't, I enjoyed this chapter!

Goodbye for now!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: Yay for Severus indeed! ♥ His points of view and ways of looking at the world definitely do get darker in this book, but I'm glad that you like that -- because I do too. :) His friends really are pretty nasty, though. I think Severus would take pleasure in getting the goods over the people in his current social circle, even though he joined them by choice; I see him as that sort of person.

Harry's resisting the Imperius Curse was my exact line of thought for having Severus immune to Veritaserum! We do know how much he likes it in canon, and he's extremely adept at controlling his thoughts, after all. I think if anyone could resist Veritaserum, it would be an Occlumens.

My eyes are drooping as I'm writing this response (and woe, it's only nine-thirty!), but if you're not able to tell yourself, I'm loving your reviews, as always. Thank you!


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