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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Ah, I'm so glad to be back! I just got back from an overseas holiday with the family during which time i had no internet and, alas, could not read any fanfiction! Sob! So I am definitely happy to be getting back into it. Oh, and I know what you mean by it being hard to write when you're away!

Anyway, I loved this chapter as much as ever - perhaps more, considering it's been longer than usual since I read the last one! I particularly liked having a bit from James' point of view, because we haven't seen much of him so far! It was definitely nice to get a bit of insight into his and Lily's marriage - and the security guy, Dwayne (perfect name!) added a nice bit of humour to the chapter.

I love Sirius and Beth. I'm not a 100% sure if I ship them (I'm pretty sure I do, but I ship Beth and Severus too) but I just love their friendship so much! And Sirius...gah! I've firmly decided that he's my favourite character, I just love him so much. Oh, and it was nice to see the gang together again!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Holidays without Internet are sometimes nice... but then there's the problem of having no fan fiction to read or write, and that's always no fun. At any rate, I'm glad you're back (safely)!

But James and Beth and Sirius and all the rest will always be here waiting for you to return; they're not going anywhere! This is about the point in the trilogy where I got more into James's point of view, and it does crop up more in the second two books than it did in the first. I keep saying it, but I never anticipated to love writing his and Lily's relationship so much originally.

Ah, Sirius/Beth. ♥ You definitely would not be alone in shipping them at least partially, although you know me -- I'm 100% Severus/Beth. I do have a bias, though. But Sirius is a lot of fun, I'll give him that!

Thank you for reviewing!


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