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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Oooh, another great chapter! I seem to be having difficulties writing understandable reviews at the moment, so I'll make this one quick.

Poor Astoria:( Poor Draco:( Things really don't seem to be going their way, do they? I actually found the conversation/argument between Astoria's parents really interesting. This is probably the first fanfic I've read where the whole pure-blood/coming of age/marriage/obedience sort of thing has been a big factor of the plot, and I really like it! It's such a different world to the one that other characters like Harry and Ron grew up in - and Astoria's mother seems quite similar to her, from what I can see - they both seem to be very intelligent witches.

Draco's POV was great, as usual - you write him so, so well! And that ending! Just when everything seemed like it was going to get better...although perhaps (I hope!) it still will!

Great chapter!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hello, again! I understand you just fine, actually. And I really enjoy hearing from you.

Things are definitely not going Draco or Astoria's way at the start of this chapter. But I think they each find a small cause for hope. Astoria's mother isn't quite ready to accede to her husband's demands, although she wouldn't be happy to see Astoria run off with Draco, either. I'm glad my thoughts on the whole practice and ritual of pureblood courtship seem interesting. A lot is obviously modeled after the customs of European aristocracy before the industrial revolution.

Things have taken another weird turn for Draco, but at least he has his head on straight at this point. We shall soon see how he handles it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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