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Review:Olives says:
Woo! I caught up to the current chapter! I now feel completely justified at saying how I feel like my heart was just ripped out and run over. I knew it was coming but it is always so sad to read how they died, although I'm glad James knew Lily was pregnant. And to think of Harry never getting a chance to meet his little sister...
On the other hand, last chapter was the complete opposite. I like how you tied in the Map and Cloak in so well while keeping it original. And seeing(reading?) Beth and Sev together again was wonderful and made me so happy I may have sqealed a bit which earned me some lovely looks that silently questioned my sanity. Don't you just love family?
I'm so glad you recognized it! After I posted my last review I felt really stupid for doing it. I was going to change sword to pen but figured that it was already confusing enoughif you didn't know it. I am a huge fan of the Inheritance Cycle although I have yet to find an Inheritance fanfiction I like. I'll read most fantasy but classics like LotR and HP remain at the top.
Until next week,
Olives
10/10

Author's Response: Hurray to you for catching up! Although I am sorry it was at such a sad point -- I'll try my hardest to fix your heart, I promise. ♥ (Look, there's a new one for you!) I did think it was very necessary to keep the canon ending for the Potters, but we know Harry does avenge them, and that's what matters.

I am SO glad that everyone else is at the point where Beth and Severus are back together again too! It was so hard keeping that from you all, not letting on whether it would happen or not. I missed their interactions so much in writing this book, believe me. My family's questioned my sanity a few times regarding fan fiction, but that's why you build pseudo-families online!

I remember very well the first time I picked up the book! Never tried reading any Inheritance Cycle fan fiction, though -- but isn't it amazing how young he was when he wrote those books? I'm eternally jealous.

Thank you for reviewing!


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