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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Yay, I was so excited when I realized that the third chapter of your awesome story had FINALLY been updated! Because I have to say, it has been quite a while;) But it was definitely worth the wait!

I'd forgotten how much I loved this story and how much I love Ellie's character, and I honestly can't wait to find out more - there was so much mystery surrounding this chapter and now I find myself asking all these questions about where the plot is going to go and what's going to happen next. Something about the Founders, perhaps? That would be cool! Or maybe time-travel? Or a whole lot of dead people from different eras randomly appearing? I really have no idea, but whatever it is, I'm sure you'll write it really well!

I love the way you write banter. It's funny without being over-dramatic or super cliche. And it's witty without being irritating or over-the-top. Most of all I love Ellie's character! And I really like Ben, too!

Can't wait for the next chapter (and Regulus!) Oh, and I can't believe I haven't added this to my favourites! Definitely doing that now.


Author's Response: Aww! You're always so nice to me! And yeah, the last chapter was written in January, so a very long time!

Yes, the Founders are still set to make an appearance as well as Regulus, because one can never have too much of Regulus.

I have some difficulty with the banter, especially in this one, because it's difficult for me to show the different personalities, so I'm super happy to hear that you liked it!

I'm glad you like Ben! I haven't had too much of a reaction about him so far, so it's nice to hear some feedback on him.

Thanks for the as usual amazing review!

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