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Review:Hagrid21 says:
I loved this first chapter! I think its a great idea to sort of show Snape and the other Slytherins initiation and parallel that with the Gryffindors first meeting with the Order. It really makes you think that this war was fought by a bunch of kids. The decisions may have been made by Voldemort and Dumbledore but the young people you highlighted in this chapter will be the ones doing the fighting.

I'm scared about what Sirius may do when he goes on his first mission. How far will he be willing to go for revenge? An angry Sirius can be detrimental to both sides so everyone should be on the lookout.

Great first chapter. I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Hi there! I'm so, so excited you liked this first chapter! And I'm really excited that you picked up on the parallels with our group and the Death Eaters and just as they'd had their first meeting, the prospects are getting their initiation.

I really hope to do justice to both sides of Sirius in this story. Both the funny, sweet, loving man and the one who really has very little control over his temper.

Thank you so much for this awesome review! I'm on vacation so I wasn't able to post chapter 2 last Saturday, but it will be posted this coming and then posting will be back to normal after that :)!

Thank you!!!

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