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Review:StellaRose says:
Wow--I'm speechless! This is really great magnolia_magic!

This quote really hit me the hardest for some reason:

'It was strange though not to be thinking for two.'

I love how you incorporated this into the story. The one little difference they had and how it was much more noticeable after the death of Fred. The part at the end where you mentioned that he was unsure if it was himself or Fred talking was great too. They were always considered almost one person so the idea that George would think he was hearing Fred is a nice idea.

No cc on your characterization-I think you nailed it. Your take on how George handled grief was really realistic and I like how you added the random student's death as a way for him to 'stop seeing red.'

I've never read anything from George's POV about his twin's death so this was very interesting. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Hi! Wow, I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! I was really, really uncertain about my characterization of George--I thought I might have missed the mark with him. It's such a relief that you didn't think that was the case.

It was hard to imagine what it would be like to lose a twin, but I ended up thinking that it must be like an extension of yourself was gone. So I tried to get that idea across with this chapter. I'm so glad you liked the line about thinking for two; it made me sad to write, but it's how I imagined George might feel in this situation.

Thank you for your kind words! I really appreciate the swap, and I'll be waiting for updates on Truth Will Out :) Thanks again!


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