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Review:Courtney Dark says:
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Oooh, this was a really, really good chapter! Definitely the best one so far, but in saying that I think I need to go back and re-read the first four, because some of the details have sort of been erased from my mind!

I actually don't know what to say about this chapter except for the fact that it was great - sorry, but my reviewing skills (if I even had any skills in the first place) have become kind of terrible in the last few weeks!

I loved all the tension in this chapter, especially in the second half, the scene between Teddy and Dom. When Teddy lost his temper, he actually reminded me of Lupin in the DH, when he and Harry at that fight at Grimmauld Place - which I guess is a good thing, considering Teddy is his son! I really love your characterization of both Teddy and Dom, and the way you write their relationship. It seems very real - and by that I mean that they clearly love each other, but have a healthy amount of squabbling and ups and downs.

I thought there was something fishy about that Delilah character - and I'm also interested to find out more about this werewolf pack and the werewolf who bit Dom. I hope more will be revealed soon!

Poor Dom:( Not being able to have kids. But I loved the family dynamics in this chapter - I have to admit, I'd forgotten about Louis until you mentioned him in your authors note, haha. But I guess you could always have him pop out of nowhere suddenly, and be all like: "Family! I have returned at last from Lapland" or something. Or not.

Great chapter!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing. I am glad you liked this chapter. I wish you have the time to stick to this story to find out what happens next =)

Your reviewing skills are awesome, haha. I am so happy you liked this chapter.

I am glad you liked the Teddy/Dom scene. I want Teddy to be like his parents so I am pleased you caught on that. I am happy you like Dom's characterisation as well, and their relationship. I want to stay away from cliches so your comment means a lot to me.

Delilah is someone crazy yeah, and we'll see more of her soon. A lot is revealed in the next two chapters =)

I put a lot of thought into the child part and family dynamics so I am glad you liked it. Honestly, I had forgotten about Louis too until some reviewers pointed it out to me and by then it was too late to include him. I do feel it would be random if he just returned out of the blue though so I decided to make him non-existent in the story altogether.

Thank you.


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