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Review:unakrnkiller says:
No!

I knew this was coming, but in the back of my head I was still hoping that you would let them live. I feel like a piece of my heart has been ripped out. I suppose that means that you did a great job writing this chapter.

I am curious to see what the next chapter will bring. Will Beth return to tell James of her success with Severus and find her best friends murdered? Will Sirius end up spending 12 years in prison for the murder of Peter and betrayal of the Potters when Beth knows the truth? Will Severus reveal to Beth that he murdered her father...and if he does, how will she react?

I hope the next chapter has some happy Severus/Beth moments to fill this hole in my heart.

Thanks for the amazing story. :)

Author's Response: Unfortunately, no matter how sad it was -- and it was actually a lot sadder than anticipated, with how attached I ended up getting to James -- his and Lily's deaths were always inevitable. It's like I just explained in another response, but they were such catalysts to the entire Second Wizarding War that it almost felt like I didn't have the power to reverse it, if that makes any sense.

All of your questions are going to be answered in future chapters, I promise! Sirius, Peter, Remus, Beth, and Severus are all explained and shown, and in pretty quick fashion, actually. I'm excited for you to read about that! Severus doesn't come up for a couple more chapters, I think, but he does come back, I assure you. ;)

Thank YOU for the amazing review! It was lovely to hear from you again. ♥ I hope to see you back for future installments, too!


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