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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here for review tag =)

This was certainly a very touching read. I think you did great, especially considering that this is out of your comfort zone. You portrayed Myrtle's despair pretty well and I was hooked while reading.

I enjoyed your descriptions very much, especially of the sunlight in the beginning, and that of the pain towards the end. I couldn't spot any obvious grammar errors.

Your plot concept itself was unique and made me give some thought to a forgotten character like Myrtle. You captured the anguish of being a ghost among the living aptly.

All in all, this was a nice read and I liked it.

Good job!
9/10
Cheers
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hi Aditi/AD/AditiDraco95! :)

Thanks a lot for the review! :)

It's great to hear that I wrote this convincingly. As I said, I don't usually write angst, though I've always wanted to. This challenge gave me a perfect opportunity to explore the genre, and to take a deeper look into Myrtle's character. I must admit that I didn't pay too much attention to her till I thought of this story either.
I'm glad this made you think. It's lovely when stories and writers manage to do that.

Thanks a lot :)


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