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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hi! I'm here a little late with the review you requested. :)

I thought that getting a little of Barrett's story was interesting. It really gave me an idea of why he is the way he is. He's been blamed for things throughout his entire life, and now that things are going wrong in the Wizarding World, he wants to escape from the blame, though the fault actually was his, in this case. From the newspaper article, I see that the entire Wizarding community feels the same way about the high crime rates--Barrett just isn't doing what he should do in order to manage his department properly. I sure do hope that something turns around soon!

I only found one grammar mistake in the entire chapter, and it was this: “Yes. Because you were be mean to us.”

I think that you should probably say "being mean to us" instead of "be mean to us," simply because of the context that the dialogue is in. But it was just a little slip-up--no big deal. :)

Really good chapter! I can't wait to see the next one!

May your pen never run out of ink!

~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: Hi!! :)

I'm really glad that you found his story interesting. I think that there's always a reason why people go 'evil,' and I'm glad that this helped you understand why he is the man he is today.

Thanks for pointing out that typo - you're absolutely right and I will go back and change that as soon as possible.

I'm so happy that you liked the chapter! Thank you so much for taking the time to do this, you're always so helpful and I really, really appreciate it!! :)


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