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Review:Enjolras says:
Ah! Incredible story. Greatly written from a child's perspective, too. I also love the idea behind it, because it seems you have summed up the entire Next-Generation in one chapter - though you've focused on Victoire's thoughts a little more.

This version of Victoire is my favourite, I have to say. Leading adventures through the woods, building bath-mobiles, and let's not forget the "Vic Rule". Her personality seems to be the perfect mix of Weasley and Delacour (though I have a feeling that she would refuse to acknowledge the latter?) and I just love the way you've written her.

You get snippets of each of the childrens' personalities in this, even if they've only spoken a few words. After I read the next few chapters of this, I must take a peek at Proud to be a Lupin (because, I'm a sucker for anything Lupin-related).

This is just really fantastic, so I'm gonna go and read some more (how can I resist, really?)

Author's Response: Thank you! :) Yay! I'm glad I managed to pull the whole child's perspective off, because I was worried it would be a bit fake. Hahah that was unintentional -- I had so much fun describing their characters, and what they looked like! I do love a bit of Next-Gen! :P

Aw, thank you so much! I really wanted to make this Victoire believable as both a Weasley, and a Delacour, with a great sense of adventure and daringness, but then this kind of protective side and bossiness!

Eeek that is such a lovely thing to say! I love the Lupins too, they are super duper cool! :D

Thank you so much for such an awesome review! This made my day!

-Sophie :D


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