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Review:StellaRose says:
Hey there! The Coco scene was great! Made me love Adie even more and holy Gus! lol. It's kind of hard for me to understand Gus but he's pretty funny. I think Harry is very in character. In the books, he was always kind of concerned and worried about everything so I like how you've portrayed him so far.

No ccs really. But I do have one question...How did Adie not know who James Potter was? Even if they weren't friends at Hogwarts she still would have interacted with him a little, wouldn't she? I'm sorry if you did explain it somewhere and I just missed it. But besides that little detail I think you've done a really great job! Can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: Hello! Very sorry for this very late response, but moving swiftly on, gee, thanks! Coco is one of my better on-the-spur-of-the-moment decision- i'm glad you liked her, and Gus as well.

As for your question, Addie really is rather an extrovert. True, her best friend is James' cousin, and her former boss his father, but she doesn't really discuss their families with these people. With Harry, its work, with Hugo, it's the different ways to pronounce 'pizza' and the benefits of a goblin-owned economic structure over a wizard owned one. Quite naturally, James never came up. Besides, even in school, he was her senior, so there was no scope of acquaintance there. I hope this answered your question.

Thanks for everything,

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