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Review:APerkins says:
I'm really loving the Hogwart's world you are creating. Its one of my favourite things - the world where students drop dung bombs, and race brooms vs muggle skates, make other students eyebrows grow, or have them sprout horns, or become engulfed in a cloud of butterflies. I really like how creative you have been with that, some of those ideas are just superb.

I still feel like I dont know what the plot conflict is in the story, and Im not sure whether there needs to be one, but .. no wait, that applies to the next chapter, so Ill review that instead.

Im loving the journey at the moment, I just dont know where its heading! hooked !

Author's Response: Aaaa wow seeing all these reviews just made my day :) So thank you for that!

I think above all else Hogwarts is a school, and so I try to have all the typical daily-life type stuff that goes with it, like classes and (in the case of the Marauders) a lot of pranks and silly behaviour. I had way too much fun thinking of things for them to do to each other! :P

There are little things that have happened so far that will be important later, but you're right - there's really not much of a plot by this point! It starts to appear around chapter 20, I think, haha. I don't think real life has a plot, so this doesn't have a super strong plot either, at least in the beginning. But I'm glad that style hasn't put you off! Thanks so much for your review and I'm off to respond to the other ones :)


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