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Review:potterfan310 says:
Did somebody say Big Bang Theory :D Love that show!!

Aww bless Phina trying to give the couple advice. Maybe she wishes someone had told her that.

Phina and her cravings make me smile. Especially when she starts eating when they though they were getting detention. Aww I wish her and Al could have had a bit of alone time because she could have told him. *Hint hint*

Two things:

One - "You will help Filch on Saturday at six," I say, pointing to the girl, "and you will help Filch on Sunday at 2 in the morning." - You switched from writing the number to using the number.

Two - "And he seems to have a large wet spot on his butt." - Butt sounds rather American, it'd be bum instead.

I honestly can't wait until the day she tells him!!! Can't wait for the next chapter. ♥

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph :)

Author's Response: High five! I love that show as well! I'm excited for the new season.

I've heard that pregnant women get strange food cravings and just food cravings in general so I thought I'd add that in as one of the things that made it obvious she was pregnant. It's going to be happening a lot throughout the story.

She and Al do spend some alone time in the next chapter but what you're hoping to happen isn't going to happen. I've gotten the hint though and the revealing shouldn't be too far away now.

Thanks for pointing those out, I'll get to editing them as soon as I finish replying to this! i can't believe that I missed that!

Thanks so much for the review Soph!


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