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Review:patronus_charm says:
I figured I should review this before Departed Souls mainly because it's THE chapter but the other review should be coming soon!

Man, you really know how to crush mine and Beth's feelings, Rachel! Gah her excitement about finding out about Snape was really tangible. She had this lovely air about her and it was so adorable and then she had to realise she had lost the map! I really like how fitted into canon but still!!!

The descriptions during Beth's walk to Snape were perfect. With the narrow corridors and candles it set the scene perfectly for their first meeting. Another ting I really loved was how you intermingled it with thoughts about Sirius and Hogwarts as it added a really lovely air to it!

They met/talked/perhaps fell in love again! It was so awkward at first, well awkward for the whole thing if I'm honest. I think the fact that her first word was uh kinda set the tone. As much as it pains me to say, Snape's reaction was perfect! It makes sense that he would do that to Beth, and it was almost worth for the moment when he realised who she was.

Then the bracelet! I feel rather sorry for it as I really did underestimate its mportance when that firstappeared! The slow realisation of Snape part was brilliant written and the small argument which ensued had me on tenterhooks!!

He did it!!! I almost thought he want going to but he did!!! I thought I was going to die of impatience when the memories were going in do how would Beth have felt. Then the kiss and the talking and the plans to meet again were just so wonderful! ♥

I'm just so excited I want to run screaming but I would probably get weird looks so I'll stick to just telling you!

The ending scene was brilliant with Dumbledore being so him. I almost don't want the next chapter because this is the nice part of Halloween so I don't want my happiness to be crushed!

An amazing chapter!!!

-Kiana

Author's Response: I am a feels-crusher, this is long since established. ♥ And yet you keep returning to review and it means so much to me! I needed to give Beth some happiness, after how unhappy she was for so much of this book, and it just makes me so sad in turn because I do love her dearly. It's like watching a good friend make a mistake and being able to say nothing about it. But now it's all over and Severus/Beth are back together and everything's right with the world and I will stop blabbering now.

Beth and Severus are so built on the inability to say things, as well as misunderstandings, that it's sort of natural that their reunion was just that, even if Severus doesn't remember Beth properly. :P And didn't I say the bracelet was important?! You'll learn just a little bit more about it later, too -- but it's a memory trigger!

THE KISS. ♥ I'm literally sitting over here giggling because it makes me so happy that I'm even able to talk about them kissing. THEY'RE BACK TOGETHER AGAIN YAAAY. We can run screaming together in our minds! I'd get weird looks for it too, unfortunately.

Thank you so much for reviewing!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and that you were willing to stop by and check out the update as always!


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