Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Mnemosyne_Morrigan says:
I'm here with your requested review!

Ok, so this one is going to be hard. For me. I'm not subversive for fluff, but I dose it like a medicine - little amounts when needed. And a good fluff for me is cute, but not oversweeted.

Unfortunately, yours was too sweet for me.

I understand that the main aim for writing something like that is to be excessively romantic and loving. It's just not my cup of tea.

Don't worry, I can be fair :) I don't like the sweetness, but it doeasn't mean something was wrong with the story itself. A lovely short piece of delicate blooming feelings. Imagery was really good, almost made me jealous of this beauriful setting. It was perfect for Dominique, it suited her. And gave the unique vibe for the unique circumstance. But I feel that with Teddy being a little awkward and both of them growing up in "humble" areas, the perfect spot for them wouldn't be so upscale.

The portrayal is quite good, especially considering it's a short piece. Both Teddy and Dominique had a spark, it's good that you didn't make them flawless or bland. It balanced everything. The moment was perfect, but the characters were not.

Overall, good and sweet :)

- Mnemosyne

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing. It means a lot to me especially since you are not much into fluff and this didn't suit your style.

I am pleased you liked the imagery, and that you felt it suited Dominique. I wanted the spot for both of them to be something very unique and different from their everyday life, thus my choice of location.

I tried not to make them flawless or bland so I am happy you liked the balance. Thank you so much for your kind words.

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 194
Submit Report: