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Review:ShieldPatronus says:
This is turning into an amazing story! You write so well, and how you describe your ideas are brilliant! The fact that you could come up with such good ideas and fully execute them is astonishing!

I loved your description of winter in London. You chose the perfect sensory words to add details to the story. Adding little details like these really add depth to the story.

I love that Harry and Ginny are back together again! I am excited to see what happens in the future for them!

As for Ron and Hermione, I don't know what to expect. I can understand both point of views, but I also believe that they are both contributing to their problem. Speaking for Ron, I can understand why he would dislike Draco because of school, past fights, and the Death Eater deal. His anger about Bill and Fred is totally understandable, but I do believe that he needs to look at Draco's new behavior. Ron is totally insecure, and he needs to realize that if everyone else thinks that there is nothing between Draco and Hermione, then there isn't. As for Hermione, I think that it is nice that she has decided to look past Draco's old ways and believe him. But, she is being incredibly stubborn. I think that she is so focused on believing Draco that she isn't realizing how it is affecting Ron. I was happy that she did turn to Harry and Ginny when she and Ron fought rather than going to visit Draco. I am anticipating how you decide their fate and relationship!

My only suggestion is that you end the fighting soon, or put a chapter in between all the drama where we can see more action from the rest of the Weasleys and their friends. Whatever you decide to write though, I am sure it will be good!

Once again, you are an amazing author! Please continue your story and don't give up on it! I love this story so much and it is amazing how you can write so well with such little time! Please update soon if you can!

Sorry this review is so long!

Author's Response: Sorry it's so long? Long reviews are the best ones!!! :D

Wow, thank you so much for those amazing compliments! I am so happy that you're enjoying the story, and the writing - it blows my mind! I can't thank you enough for those encouraging words - it is things like that that really keeps me going in writing such a long story, and that makes me feel like it's definitely worth it, so thank you!

I'm so glad that you liked the description of winter! Details like that are my favourite part to write! ;)

I love writing Harry and Ginny together, as well! :) and it's nice to hear that you enjoy reading it.

I couldn't agree more about your thoughts on Ron and Hermione. I think they are both being a bit stubborn. Ron refuses to see any change in Draco, and of course, he's always had a bit of a problem with jealousy. Having a jealous boyfriend is not very nice, believe me. But Hermione is sort of contributing to this jealousy in the way she's acting around Draco, and she's being too stubborn about it as well. They both need to try to understand where the other person is coming from, if they want to work things out... We'll see in the next chapter, right? :)

We'll definitely see more of the Weasleys and their friends as the story progresses. In the next one, there will be a lot of Percy, and in the one after that, George, and since all of these people are in the trio + Ginny's lives, they'll pop up here and there in the story :)

Really, your compliments make me SO happy! You are being too sweet to me!! I have absolutely no plans on giving up the story, and I'll try my best to update as soon as possible. Thank you so, so much for this lovely, detailed review that truly has made my day!

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