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Review:marauderfan says:
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Ok, I love this so far. I'm really curious about the ghosts (and how everything ties into the Founders - that summary is effectively intriguing, haha.) I love that this isn't just a romance story and that it's got some mystery/adventure too.

I really like the narrator and all her silly asides, like the paragraph about her Cake Sensing. You've got a lot of humour in here and you're great at writing dialogue! Particularly between Rose and Ellie. Oh and by the way, I love that Rose is into Divination, given that her parents hated it so much! :D

"I had ninety-nine (non 12+) problems, but being jealous of my brother wasnít one of them." Hahaha! Laughed out loud at that.

This is a really great story and I can't wait to read more :D

Author's Response: I'm always so pleasantly surprised to see this story being well-received! It makes me incredibly happy.

The link between the ghosts and the Founders is elaborated on in later chapters, for sure. And I really don't want the focus to be the romance, because romance in what I have planned for this kind of makes me feel awkward.

Ellie is one of the more... interesting characters I've written. She thinks quite a bit differently - almost like Luna, but I don't think I could ever write a character quite like Luna. And it's Rose's little rebellion, being into Divination!

:D Thanks for the wonderful review! Hope to see you soon!


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