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Review:magnolia_magic says:
Oh wow. I can tell I'll have to stalk you for updates on this one. This is such an intriguing start!

I love your description of this girl's experience in the streets. It's such a dreary picture, and I felt so terrible for her. But you did a wonderful job bringing it all to life, with the rain and the cold and her being shooed away from the deli without any food. And the part about her missing the cat just absolutely broke my heart. I had to imagine what it must be like to be utterly lonely, and it was devastating. I hope things look up for her soon! (It seems like this mysterious woman might be able to turn things around for her, and I'm excited to see it happen!)

So anyway. I know this review is just basically a sum-up of the plot, and I apologize for that. But I just wanted to stop by and say that I'm hooked! Great start, Farmgirl!


Author's Response: Oh, thank you! That's probably the best compliment ever! (And just so you know, I plan to try and update every two weeks or so. Slow by most standards I know, but for me it's positively warp speed!)

Thank you. I'm so glad the description worked. It was kind of a risk to start the story this way, jumping into the middle with no explanation, and not even properly introducing the character. But I'd hoped people would like it. And yes, it is a dreary picture, but hopefully by the end of the novel there will be much more hope in it.

Thanks for reading and a fun, fun review! Come back in a few weeks for more.

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