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Review:ATLpaintingflowers says:
Wow what a start. I really love crime and mystery stories, it's kind of sad there aren't that many on the archives.
Plot: This is really original. Which I really liked. It's really risque, which is really good. It has the right amount of drama and mystery. I've never read much crime next-gen so this was really cool. It could see this as a tv show.
Descriptions: I love the way you added in the details, it made it really easy to picture the scenes in my head.
Emotions/Characterization: I loved the way you wrote out what kind of person AJ was through his emotions which I thought was really cool, and I thought it was really awesome how you made him out as a sort of seer, but didn't turn that into a cliche, and I thought that was really cool.
Anyways this is a really wonderful, addicting start.

Author's Response: I wish there were more crime stories on here, they're some of my favorites. But that's why I write them. :D

I'm so happy that you liked it and that you like AJ; I was a bit weary about his Seer ability but it's necessary to this story. I'm glad you like it. :)

Thank you so much for leaving a review!


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