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Review:Hagrid21 says:
This story was so great! It had everything: romance, humor, friendship, and really messed up bad guys. I think what makes this story so great is how balanced it is. You manage to convey how things are starting to go from bad to worse in the outside world, while showing there are still good times to have and memories to be made. I think you struck gold here, managing to find an incredibly perfect balance between the group growing up, growing closer, and growing stronger as they learn what Voldemort and his followers are truly capable of.

Belle was a great character, and it's terrible that she had to die, but I understand why you had to do it. Her death gave the gang the proper push to get Dumbledore to reveal to them what he was doing to stop Voldemort. And Dumbledore couldn't deny them after they had already been through so much!

That last line has me already looking forward to the highly anticipated sequel. Really just an amazing job on this story.

Author's Response: Hi there!! Sorry for this late response! I've been on vacation visiting family :)

Oh my gosh, I am so, so excited that you liked this!!! I really wanted this story to focus just as much on friendships, and a group of teenagers all learning to be adults, as romances and stuff so I'm really, really excited that you like the balance I had with it.

YES! Belle's death was what pushed them all over the edge, needing to help and ready to commit themselves to it. Thank you so much for pointing out that you noticed that! I don't want people thinking I killed her just to be mean!

I'm so happy you liked this book, and really, really hope you like the sequel as much. Thank you!

♥ Jami

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