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Review:JKRFAN says:
Very good but this part confuses me:
Moon, what went on last night?” Rose asks we’re walking in the woods.

“Nothing I promise. I had a nightmare and he was there holding me. So I told him to stay.”

“Yea, imagine what my dad would kill him, and then probably would have grounded you for the rest of your werewolf life.”

Why does everyone state that I’m a werewolf when no one is around?

“Why am I the only one with a nickname?”

“I don’t know. Came naturally I guess.”

I start kicking a rock “I think we should all have nicknames.”

“Scorp could be Lightfoot, Al Claws, and me well Wisk.”

“Not bad.”

“Rose, are you ever going to forget about last night?” I kick the rock as far as I can.

“Nope and I’m telling everyone when you get married.”

“Better run you cat!”

I don't understand who is talking.
But I like how it's written in the present tense that is cool.

Author's Response: It goes Rose,Grace,Rose,Grace,Rose so on.. Sorry about that I thought someone would get confused

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