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Review:HarrietHopkirk says:
I love how you introduced Victoire as the geek - usually she's just very beautiful and flitters around the school all la-di-da, and people mainly focus on that rather than giving her the 'geek' persona. I found it a bit confusing that people would think that she would do their homework for them - especially as all the stuff about her family was pretty much common knowledge. But I loved how she was badass though - it really worked with the fact she is a bit of a monster (the Veela blood from Fleur and a bit of werewolfness from Bill). I definitely would not want to mess with her!

I have a feeling that this should be more than a one-shot! It just feels a little short - like you've stopped before you could really get going. I'd love to see these characters interact more and see Victoire as a friend, rather than the sarcastic person everyone makes her out to be.

A great little one-shot, well done.

Author's Response: Funnily enough, I had thought of writing her like that but the idea didn't sit well with me because her character wouldn't really end up being any different from any other story. Plus, the 'geek' version of Victoire is a lot more fun to write than the perfect version of her.

The way that I saw it was that even if they did know her family, after being at Hogwarts for so long everyone would've forgotten about that part of her for a little bit and just focused on the fact that it was Victoire. Plus, there's always the person who thinks that they can achieve something different with a person even after everyone else has failed.

Thank you so much for reviewing and for leaving your feedback!


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