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Review:AlexFan says:
I don't know why I haven't read Post Scriptum before because I'm absolutely loving it before.

I couldn't help but give a small cheer when you included Peter because he's often left out of Marauder stories. I hope that you include him later on in the story instead of letting him fade to the background (and because you're brilliant I've got a feeling you won't let him fade away.

I think Sirius would've stood up to his mother about the way she was treating the attendant but I don't think that he would've really wanted to cause a scene at the station especially with his mother, who would've no doubt started screaming at. I could be wrong about though but I think that's why Sirius doesn't speak up.

The thing that I loved most about this is the fact that Lily wasn't cold to Severus, usually she becomes incredibly cold and mean and tells him to stuff it but you did it differently and I like that because it makes sense. I don't think Lily would immediately turn into this cold person, I imagine things between them would be a bit awkward between them and such.

Anyway, I enjoyed the chapter!

Author's Response: Aww, that's great to hear! Thanks!

Peter is definitely not going to fade into the background--in fact, he becomes really important toward the end of the story. So I hope you continue reading and tell me what you think of him as his character develops.

Yeah, you're probably right. I think Sirius will always have a touch of that spoiled well-bred attitude within him, but much of it probably got groomed out by his difficult experiences in Azkaban and after his escape. Even here, he's surely more decent than his parents. But you're right, he wouldn't want to set Walburga off, not in front of his friends and the crowd.

The relationship between Lily and Severus is very complex in this story and, again, it's very important. I'd love to hear any further thoughts you have about their interactions in the later chapters, too.

Thanks for your sweet review :)

-Amanda


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