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Review:academica says:
This story looked like it needed some review love, so I decided to stop by for the Ravenclaw Review Battle!

Hah, what a cute premise! At least Harmony is well insulated against any possible Dementor attacks :) She definitely seems to have a chocolate problem and I foresee a friendly little intervention in the Room of Requirement in her future. If so, that chapter is bound to be really funny to read.

I loved the comical ways in which you showed how Harmony is definitely a chocolate addict. She seems to have purchased more chocolate from Honeydukes than ever heard of before, and I have to wonder how often she goes there and how she can rationalize spending nearly four hours in Hogsmeade just so she can get her chocolate fix. It was funny how her friends had to help her carry it and how she'd designed a special chilled compartment in her wardrobe to store it all. But after buying and carefully putting away all that chocolate--she won't even have a little piece? :)

Really cute start, and great job on this chapter!

-Amanda

Author's Response: Thanks for deciding to give it some love!

Very true, Lupin would be proud of her stock of chocolate and who knows, she might end up actually needing it (if I ever decide to turn this story dark at some point).

The way that Harmony can spend four hours in a shop just to buy chocolate is a lot like how I can spend all day sitting in a bookstore reading or the library. It's just fun for me but it can be boring for everyone else.

Thank you for the lovely review!


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