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Review:house elf says:
This is a lovely start! Hey, my name's Charlotte too *high fives your protagonist*. She seems like a very nice, normal girl. It was sweet of her to stay to keep her mother company.

You might want to consider breaking up the paragraphs into smaller ones? :) It just makes it easier to read.

Can't wait to read on :D

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review! I do shorten the paragraphs in a few chapters and will go back and edit the early ones after the story is done. :)
Hope you enjoy the story!

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