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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
Hello! It's Voldy Needs a Hug with your (very late) review.

I'm typically not a fan of Next Generation stories, but I have to admit, I tremendously enjoyed this one. While this chapter was on the shorter side, it was a light and easy read, which is important in the first chapter of any novel. Your flow was excellent! You managed to smoothly transition from one year to the next, which can be quite challenging at times. Each scene was cute and original, fitting in flawlessly with the rest of the chapter.

Your characterization was also good, although I would have liked to read a bit more about James II. He was very briefly introduced and readers don't know much about his background solely from this chapter (although he may be introduced in great detail in a later chapter). He certainly seems very similar to James I, particularly with his fixation on one particular girl!

Overall, this was a great start! 9/10

Author's Response: I'm glad you think this starts well, and has a nice flow to it, as the idea of jumping from year to year frightened me a little.

As for James, he is intentionally a bit ambiguous, because he will remain a bit of a mystery for a little while longer. :)

-ShadowRose (Taylor)

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