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Review:alicia and anne says:
I love how you opened this chapter with all of the information about Deal-makers and what they do, how rare they are. I really enjoyed that information and having the background of them and how they add the years they take from people and add it to their own lifes.

Huh, I know of a character that likes antiques... :P

I love that the Deal-maker is playing a game with her, trying to find out her limits. He's acting kind of creepy, but I would expect anyone who has that kind of power to be dark and creepy.

This mysterious 'Matthew' *giggles* guy is awesome! :P I love how he gives her her health back.

I am hooked to this! I cannot wait for more! This is so amazing! Ahhh I seriously love this so much! You're such a fantastically brilliant writer, Sam!

I hope that you win the challenge!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad. Because it's a short story, I wanted to spend the majority of it showing the actual story, so it seemed good to have the information at the beginning.

Yes, he can be very creepy when he wants to be. Games are fun and he has all the cards, so to speak.

Haha, 'Mathhew. Shush. :P But yes, he's awesome.

Thank you so much for leaving a review!


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