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Review:Lady of Tears says:
I think you're doing a great job claiming your world and your characters. I loved the opening; poor Harry and those sprouts! What a rough time he's had. I like the feel of this plot line you've created; I think things are running smoothly.

I thought your dialogue was great, and the only thing that threw me off in this chapter was Ginny. In my head, she's not as sweet as we see here. There's a bit more fire to her, and that didn't quite come across for me. But her personality can be changed, obviously, with a different timeline, but I'd want that to be more fleshed out as to why.

And I couldn't see her hugging him...unless she was trying to be cheeky, haha.

But that was the only negative thing I could see, and that is just my opinion.

I am excited to see where this goes!

-Lady of Tears

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

I wanted his day to "start with a bang"... (bad pun... I apologize :p)

I see what you mean, Ginny is just being nice, seeing as she just met Harry... Well, formally, at least.

I really appreciate your input! I'll be reviewing Ginny's character as soon as possible - I completely see where you're coming from!

Thank you so much for reviewing, I really appreciate it!!!

*FenrirGreyback


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