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Review:academica says:
Hello, stopping by from Review Tag!

I liked the normalcy of Brienne's first class. Her meeting with Fred and George was really cute, and I think you did a great job making their dialogue sound very canon and appropriate to their characterization. I also liked that her spell work wasn't perfect, but she wasn't talentless either--she's just a normal girl. It's nice to see.

I do want to point out that there was a line right after Harry's entrance that I don't think was meant to be italicized, as it wasn't a thought.

The other thing that seemed a bit off was Lupin knowing her parents. His words reminded me a little too much of what he said to Harry in canon. I think it would be good if you could go back and explain how it's different with Brienne's parents, so she isn't seen as just a female version of Harry.

Nice work :)

-Amanda

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks you for the review :)

Yeah, I really want to make Brienne seem like a normal, human girl xD Not perfect, and not too much like a female Harry, so thanks for pointing out the Lupin thing, I'll go through and try to make it a little more original :)

And thanks for pointing out the italicized bit, I'll fix that :)


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