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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
This is a bit of a short chapter so I really quickly want to move on to the next.

Freya isn't replying to Louis? How awful for him because he doesn't know what's going on. Whether her and the baby are okay, whether shes even keeping the baby. The thoughts going round in his mind I'm not surprised he's half asleep and doodling at his desk.


People are so cruel with their rumours, particularly the Gryffindors. I'm sure it's not the first time someones been pregnant in Hogwarts and certainly won't be the last! The rumours are so harsh and like Louis said he was almost glad Freya wasn't around to hear them.

Poor Louis, not knowing what to do or how he can prepare. This would have been made much easier if Freya had grown up and faced it a little more rather than just leaving him to his own thoughts. But this is probably mainly Ted's doing so I do have some sympathy for her.

Reading!

Author's Response: I think it might be the shortest chapter I've written?

Nope she's not replying to him, which is very sad for Louis. He doesn't know whether he's coming or going. He's very confused and frustrated at the moment.

They are very cruel, but I imagine that people would be. I can't imagine that people wouldn't be, especially teenagers.

It would have been, but Freya isn't going to be doing that any time soon. :( Oh yeah, it is mainly Ted's doing so there can be sympathy for Freya.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! :D


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