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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
You don't need to give out cookies. This chapter was awesome!

Louis not sleeping to start the chapter helps start off the tension and worry which continues through the whole chapter. I also love that you had him falling asleep at the Weasleys as that increased suspicion among his family that there is something going on in his life.

Going back to school he is obviously going to have to tell someone and as I've already said I don't like Horatio. He doesn't seem to fit the situation well and although sometimes you need somebody to joke in a serious situation I don't like his manner at all!

Louis again continues to be an awesome character throughout this though it is a little annoying that he did tell Horatio when he promised Freya he wouldn't say anything to anyone yet as soon as he got on the train he told his best friend.

Also the cracks are beginning to show here with Freya being so concerned and not talking until spoken to. It is going to become obvious very quickly that something is wrong and you know how the rumour mill is.

Also the flat above uncle George's shop... classy!

Author's Response: You can have cookies anyway for reviewing and being awesome :D

He goes through a lot of tension and a lot of thoughts. His mind is all over the place at the moment and it takes its toll on him. There's many more times when the poor boy can't sleep. I'm glad that you loved him falling asleep at the Weasley's. Poor Louis, he needs to sleep.

Aww it's okay that you don't like Horatio at the moment, I hope that he grows on you. He can come across as arogant but he does love Louis very much.

Well, Louis wanted to tell Horatio as it was eating him up inside. He knew that Horatio would support him and not say anything about it to anyone else.

I'm so glad that you think Louis is an awesome character, I wanted him to have more traits of Bills and I imagine him to be very calm, collected and supportive person. That's not to say that he doesn't have his mothers temper. :P

Freya is in a big sense of denial at the moment, sadly she'll need to snap out of it a lot sooner than she expected.

Oh yes, they are a classy bunch. :P


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