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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Ravenclaw Review Tag!

This is a really great oneshot full of emotion. My story The Joker and Her's key theme is grief aswell, and I think you really cut straight into how somebody feels when they lose someone they love; right down to their physical pain. It's very true to life, and you make Marlene feel human, an actual physical being, rather than a character on a page.

You also make it feel like she had a real history and backstory, and a relationship with Sirius that perhaps wasn't reciprocated. It all just adds to the pain, and makes this a very blisteringly good read xD

Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your one-shot about Teddy and Victoire is very nice, and has some of the key elements you say mine has.

I think Marlene and Sirius truly did have a pretty serious friendship, but he just didn't return those feelings for her. It's terribly sad!

Thank you for your review


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