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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
TAMMI-

I promised I would read this and I didn't realise it was a teenage pregnancy. Just a boring ole' normal one so I am in love already!

I think you're right. The character you have created here fits Louis so much better as you can use the attentiveness of Bill really well here in a way that it probably wouldn't work with Harry as they were much younger when Albus was born than Bill would have been when Louis was born. The experience really shines through here making sure Freya and then Louis are okay.

Louis seems like a really good character and I can tell I'm going to like him throughout this. He doesn't try to blame her or anyone else for the situation he's found himself in and I really like that as he starts to take responsibility for it already by promising to himself that he will stand by her. He also gives her strength and support in front of her, only allowing himself to break down when he is alone which is another reason why I really like him.

Freya is going to be interesting as at the moment she is very fragile and confused about the situation so by people finding out it won't be in her interests yet. I want to see how she becomes stronger throughout the story. I want to know what they're going to do!

Eeeek! Reads on!

Author's Response: SUMMER!

I am so so happy that you've decided to read this story! Nope not a normal one, a teenage one. :D

I'm glad that you think that, now when I look back and read it, I can't imagine anyone apart from Louis being in this situation.

I'm glad that you like Louis already, nope he doesn't blame anyone but himself. There's times when he blames himself entirely, he takes a lot of the blame for this when it should be shared out between the two of them.

Freya is very fragile at the moment and extremely confused and frightened. She's going through a denial stage.

Thank you so much for reviewing!!! :D


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