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Review:Jchrissy says:
I can't believe I missed this chapter for so long! I thought I'd poke by just to check, and boom! Yay!

I LOVE Lorcan. He's kind, easy going, doesn't seem t have set boundaries, and really the dynamic between the three canon characters is amazing.

The start with the sand storm conversation began us with a perfect, eerie sort of feeling. We knew it would be coming, though part of me thought you were just trying scare us... I was pretty certain it would come.

Rose waking in the night and the storm almost seeming soft until she realizes what those little grains can do gave the story such an awesome shot of adrenaline! Things really sped in this chapter, both with the action and with painting us readers a clear picture of where Scorpius and Rose (love) are in terms of their relationship/friendship.

This is a small detail, but I really liked Scorpius's mention of why he had to get out and how overbearing his mum was. I can see that :P

Aww Kiana I feel like this was the start to a really amazing adventure! I wish you'd get yourself back in town so I can see what's on the other end of that cliffie you left us!!!

Author's Response: Jami! I'm sorry this has taken so long to reply to! Being laptop free really sucks!

I'm so glad that you liked Lorcan because he's going to be around for a lot more!

Haha, foreshadowing is such a fun technique! I'm really glad that you found it worked and that it matched up with Rose's section. The storm was a lot of fun too, so I'm glad you liked it!

Bahaha, I sort imagined her to be Narcissa when writing her! I'm back in about a week, so I can finally updated this story! Thank you for this wonderful review, Jami! :D

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