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Review:AlexFan says:
The thing that I absolutely loved about this chapter is that you showed what Remus's night might've been like. That's not often something that's shown so I was surprised to see that you had.

Poor Remus, I can't imagine what he must go through every night. He should let himself at least have some friends, even if they do ask why he always disappears every month.

I also love that you're showing that James and Lily didn't like each other at all in the beginning. Sometimes in fanfiction the story starts off with James thinking that Lily is very pretty and all that so this is a nice change.

As always, awesome job on the chapter!

Author's Response: Well, hello again, AlexFan :) thank you for yet another lovely review!

I am so glad that you loved seeing Remus's transformation and how it may have been like. I think this is an important thing to the story of the marauders and I just didn't think it could be left out or skimmed over. So I'm pleased you liked seeing it in here :)

Yes, poor Remus, it must have been hell for him, and I think that first transformation at Hogwarts must have been one of his worst! I totally agree with you, he should let himself have some friends! Never fear, we all know he has to make friends soon enough, but he is in for a lonely few chapters yet :( I'm looking forward to writing him befriending the marauders - and then all the mischief they get up to once he does :D

Ugh! I'm glad you liked that James doesn't instantly fall for Lily. I find it really unrealistic for him to see her for the first time and instantly fall in love with her - to me, that's just not how an eleven year old boy would be! Especially when he has the allure of Hogwarts and a mischievous new best friend. Of course, sometime soon he will fall for her, but not just yet ;)

Thank you again for the great review!

Haronione ♥

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