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Review:TheGirlWithTheLaughingFace says:
You don't have a lot of puncutation/grammar problems which I am extremely jealous of. This is definitely a twist on the Marauders fic. Usually they are in Gryffindor or another house but you never get a Slytherin pov so props on that! I really love the way you described your characters and I love Lily still being friends with Charlotte Melanie and Amanda even though they are in Slytherin. I can't think of anything wrong with this chapter So 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like the fact that they're in Slytherin. I really think that Harry's case was an exception and there wasn't always this tense hatred between Gryffindor and Slytherin, but of course there was always rivalry. Slytherins can't all be evil! And I'm so glad you like the description of the characters! I wrote those beginning chapters AGES ago so I'm glad they don't come off as complete rubbish :P Once again thanks so much for your review ♥

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