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Review:marauderfan says:
Hello :) I really like this, it's a cute idea! I think you've characterised Mr Evans quite well, and I really like the way you're written Petunia too. In particular the line about how Mr Evans knew that Petunia would be able to tell if he was lying. I have a feeling Petunia was really quite intelligent (she is Lily's sister after all!) despite her less agreeable qualities, haha. And I like stories that show Petunia's concern for Lily even when she doesn't want to admit it.

The only critique I have is that I want more! :P This feels like a great set up to what I'm sure would be a really ridiculous meeting. If Lily brings James over, and Petunia brings Vernon... ack! I can only imagine the disaster that would ensue and I think you should write it! :D

Well done Lotte, this is a lovely story :)

Author's Response: Aww, thank you!

I actually wrote it as a short story, but I just didn't know how to write Vernon and therefore changed it to a one-shot.

But as I read you review, I got an idea for a new chapter. So now, thanks to you, it will be a short story! Just a warning, if you are going to read the next chapter that is, that chapter will be from Petunia's POV. The story will also have a new title. But I'm not sure what it will be yet...

Once again, thank you so much. I feel like flying over to your page, and reviewing your stories now. You really made my day!

- Lotte


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