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Review:CassiePotter says:
Hi Maggie!
I'm so sorry that it's taken me so long to come back to your wonderful story! But here I am, and with such a fantastic chapter to review!
I love when all four of the founders are together, because you write their banter so well! I love reading how they interact, especially because their personalities are so different. (And also because I don't write them all together in The Fourth Daughter... Can you imagine that? I think it would be a nightmare! Haha) I think the way you've characterized each of them makes the balance between the four really wonderful.
I really want to know Salazar's story! Hopefully that's revealed soon! And I loved the conversation between Helga and Rowena at the end of the chapter. They seem like they'd make great friends!
This chapter was really lovely! I am so excited to continue with this story! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Cassie, hi! It's so nice to hear from you again, especially now that I've finally had a chance to catch up on The Fourth Daughter (which is so lovely, by the way...I owe you a few reviews soon, for sure!)

Yay, I'm so glad you like the banter! When I first wrote this, I didn't have as much of that in this chapter. But thanks to a reviewer's suggestion I extended it a little and I was hoping it turned out well. I hoped to show all their distinct personalities, so it's wonderful to hear that you saw that in them!

Salazar's story will be revealed soonish, so you won't have to wait too much longer :) And this is really the chapter where I think Rowena comes through as a character. I'm so happy you liked her conversation with Helga, and their strengthening friendship.

Thank you for such a wonderful review! It made my day for sure!


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