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Review:Remus says:
Heya!! :D

So long ago, when chapter 6 of Pack was posted, you were the first one to review it. So I told myself "I'm going to read something of hers and review it." Yeah, well time has passed and I haven't done that. UNTIL NOW! Mwahahaha!!


So I had to pick this one because it sounded very original. I'm intrigued about these Deal Makers. About how they take years for a deal. I've never read something like that before and I like it!

When the Deal-Maker says: "For a price." It reminds me of 2 TV character that I have no idea if you know: 1) Rumpelstiltskin from Once Upon a Time AND 2) Kyubey from an anime called Puella Madoka. Where he'll take your soul for a wish. Hahaha. So as great as your Deal Maker is...I don't trust him. Haha XD

I spotted something towards the very end: "My partner nows"--think you meant 'knows'. Silly K! :D

oh! Doh! I just read your AN and yeah...a Deal Maker is just like Rumple.

AH! I want to know what happens to Alice! Does 'Matthrew' take the baby? This is such an original story so I can't wait to see where you're going to take this. Adding it to my faves! :D

Until next time


Author's Response: Hello!!! :D

Aww. You didn't have to, but thank you! :D

I'm glad you picked this one, I'm really looking forward to continuing it.

Haha, yes. I got the idea for Deal-Makers from Rumpel and from crossroad demons in legends. And getting Rumpel for the challenge was awesome because I finally got to write about them. :D

No, don't trust. At least, not completely. ;)

Ah, thank you! I'll fix that.

What will 'Matthew' do? You'll have to wait and see. ;)

Thank you so much for leaving a review!


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