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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
It's Voldy Needs a Hug here with your (very late) review.

Before I begin, I haven't had a chance to read the prequel (although I am quite tempted to at the moment). Despite not reading the prequel, I felt that this one-shot did an excellent job as a stand-alone story. You did an excellent job of introducing the characters and providing a bit of a backstory for any readers, like me, who haven't had an opportunity to read the prequel.

Your flow was excellent. You smoothly transitioned from one event to the next throughout the chapter and kept it moving at a rapid pace. The chapter didn't feel rushed or drawn out.

Your characterization was also spectacular. In a single chapter, you managed to reveal quite a bit of information about each character. You did an exceptional job conveying Victoire's pain after she discovers the letter. Her drastic change in emotion made her seem life-like and realistic.

Overall, I tremendously enjoyed this chapter and will hopefully be reading the prequel sometime in the near future!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing.

I am pleased to know that you found this working as a stand-alone despite not having read the prequel. It's good to know that you think I introduced the characters and backstory well.

It's a relief that you didn't think it was rushed or drawn out either and that it flowed fine, thanks.

My characterisation was spectacular, really? Thank you so much. It makes me so happy to hear that you could feel Victoire's pain and it all was realistic for you.

I am glad you enjoyed this, thanks a ton for your lovely review!


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