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Review:PitchBlue says:
Oh man I was so happy to finally have internet and then to see you updated! :D This chapter is so brilliant for many reasons. Firstly, you give (once again) this great insight into Peter's personality and how he's gradually going to the dark side, I can literary feel the tension building! And secondly, aw man that scene where Sirius is teasing Remus was just too hilarious. I actually laughed out loud at that part, especially at the sentence:

"Merlin's beard," Sirius said breathlessly. "It's finally happened."

Just brilliant! I also love how you're keeping me guessing and everything's still a bit unclear, I think that's a good thing!

Maybe I've already said this, but I think the way you combine description and dialogue is just amazing. Just brilliant as always :)

Author's Response: Ahhh, sorry I didn't respond to this earlier, I was on vacation ... but you know how that goes ;)

I'm glad you like Peter - he's finally fun to write now that he's got Luciana to interact with! I do get stuck when I write his POV tho 'cos it's hard to not give any of the other subplots away. So that's why things are intentionally confusing, because there's still 13 more chapters to go!


And aww, I know. I love writing the Marauders when they are teasing each other, it's so cute XD

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