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Review:academica says:
Hey, here from the Ravenclaw Review Battle :)

This is definitely an intriguing start! I feel so sad for your main character. She actually reminds me a bit of Harry, given that all her friends are far away in the magical world and she's having family trouble at home. It does seem like her family must be cursed or something to suffer all that death.

At least she has her cat. And what a cute name! I hope Melon continues to brighten her day :)

I picked out a couple of things that I wanted to bring to your attention. One is a canon mistake--Lily lived in a place very close to Spinner's End, but she didn't actually live in the same neighborhood as Snape. I also found it a bit odd to describe the blonde hair/blue eyes combination as "unique," since I thought it was pretty common.

Nice start. It'll be neat to see where this goes.

-Amanda

Author's Response: Thank you! She is a bit like the book Harry because she's pretty sarcastic in general. Yeah.something like that. (!)

I think I'll fix that right now actually, and just say it was a bad neighborhood, but not Spinner's End. And I guess I didn't make this clear, but I meant that her appearance was unique, not just the hair and eyes.

Thanks for your review!


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