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Review:Johnny Nightmare says:
I have got to say you are progressing into a very good writer. I really like reading this story and I love how you used the man who lost his family as an example of how we should cherish the ones we love. One small thought is that I would have Draco ease up on the Weasley bashing because the Ministry would most likely have seized all of the Malfoy family's assets because of their support of Lord Voldemort. Anyway keep up the good work.

P.S. On a side note, I am working on my first story now. I've decided that I am going to write about American Wizards. I have a lot of good ideas so far but I still have problems writing it out so for now I have just been creating characters and Magical Beasts.

Author's Response: That makes me so happy to hear! I am glad that his story seems to have served its purpose, and that you liked it. Maybe you're right, maybe the Malfoys would have lost their assets, but I just figured that while Malfoy is trying to act nice, leopards don't lose ALL their spots over night ;)

It's great that you've started working on your story! I think you should just wait for inspiration to strike when it comes to the actual writing. I find that it's the only thing that works for me, anyway. Good luck with your story :) and thank you so much for reading and reviewing mine!


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