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Review:AlexFan says:
Hey there! So here I am reviewing! I'll get right to it.

Things have gotten interesting and the plot has picked up and gotten interesting. Finally we get to see some action between these two characters!

It's often difficult to tell a story from different points of views and still be able to distinguish your characters but you've done it really well. I can tell that this is Albus because of the way that he thinks and treats people.

I like the fact that Scorpius just came right out and admitted that he liked Rose though. Nothing major or lots of drama just a straight out statement. It's nice from the usual screaming and fighting that I often witness.

The only thing that I can point out is the minor grammatical errors like "preposition" instead of "proposition." Other than that, awesome job!

Author's Response:
Hi again! I was hoping that the plot is coming along. You'll see even more action and reactions among Aaliyah and Albus in chapters to come. ;)

I get what you mean about the different points of views being difficult but I am happy that you could tell it was Albus easily. :)

Scorpius is my baby. :P He may have a drama queen side at times but he has always managed to be calm, collected, and straight forward. I think Rose is the kind that would do the screaming, fighting, and denial thing, lol. I always thought she would get that from her father.

My beta and I probably missed that. Oops. I'll go back and edit this chapter.
Thanks for the great review again.
~Sama


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