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Review:patronus_charm says:
I adored this chapter and it was definitely worth the wait! ♥

I really adore your Lucy! She's so perfectly normal and relatable that I can't help think I would be doing what she does. For some strange reason I find it cute she's a gardener, I'm not sure why but I'll roll with it.

I had a feeling that Scorpios staying over would end badly and I couldn't help but feel a little glad that it did. I mean, it wouldn't be them if it went well, as I can still clearly remember their first kiss!

Yay more Flora scenes and we got to find out what was really going on with Albus! I'm already irrationally disliking Graham. The names just a bit grey to me so I can imagine he will be too. And thats totally not a biased thought! :P

Dun dun dun, what's happened to Scorpius? The settings so bleak and horrible it added even more tension to the scene. Then Draco's reaction was perfect and had me cracking up, in a slightly guilt-inducing way.

Oh well, another great chapter even with the tinges of guilt! ♥

Author's Response: Awh, thank you! :3

Heh, gardener!Lucy is actually transplanted over from another fic of mine called How to Draw Almost Anything. I haven't written it in a while, but the Lucy character in that was a lot of fun to come up with so I kind of...shoved her here too.

Hee, not at all! I think there might be a little more on Flora and her new beau in later chapters - sorry to say it isn't as doomed as you might hope ;)

What happened? In a nutshell...Scorpius /might/ have died again. Or, nearly. Because he's essentially kept alive by magic, he has to have 'doses' of it now and again so it doesn't run out, and, in this chapter, what with missing his hospital appointment, he'd simply run out of life force and had begun to shut down. Lucy got him to St Mungo's in the nick of time~

Thank you so much for reviewing! You're an amazing reviewer, always giving some really insightful feedback as well as being genuinely very nice - I think I saw you up for best reviewer at the Dobbys, actually! I missed voting but I sincerely hope you win :3 ♥ ♥

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