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Review:marauderfan says:
Review tag! (although I was going to read this anyway... I hope that's not cheating!)

I adore your Helga. She seems like such a free spirit, and has such a good heart. I liked the contrast in the way she reacted to Evan's story as opposed to how Rowena and Salazar reacted. And I loved the bit when she insists on going barefoot in the castle!

Rowena made a good appearance in this chapter as well. She has only had short scenes so far but you've characterised her really well through her actions. I think the secret project she's working on might be the diadem, but I feel like she has a lot of other secrets and I'm really curious about her!

I like the way Helga can get under Salazar's skin and tell what he's actually thinking - or at least is good enough at bluffing that she can catch him off guard. I really enjoyed reading their conversation in the corridor, particularly how they notice things about each other. It was funny how Helga was anything but subtle when watching Salazar, and Salazar (in true Slytherin fashion, I think) was so guarded, but still watching her as well ;) Two chapters in and I'm already shipping Helga/Salazar sooo much

AND OMG HOW COULD YOU END IT THERE L;AKSDLKFJAKSJ

Author's Response: Hi, and thank you so much for your review! No, it's definitely not cheating (and I may have cheated by posting in your review thread, so we're even in any case ;) )

It makes me so happy to hear that you're still enjoying Helga. You're right, she is definitely free spirited and enjoys doing things her own way. And she is a very nurturing person, which I think would come into play with the students quite a bit.

You just might be right about Rowena's project :). She'll be around more in later chapters, so I hope you continue to like her. I actually really would like to tell her story in another fic sometime; it's an interesting one, and I try to bring out little glimpses of it throughout this story.

Haha, yep, Helga doesn't have skills in stealth :P And Salazar makes it his business to be observant. I'm glad you liked seeing this interaction between them. I like it too, because they're still kind of getting their footing with each other. It's an interesting little dance they have at this point :)

Thanks again for the lovely review! Sorry for the cliffie, but everything will be cleared up, I promise! I really loved reading these reviews!

--Maggie


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