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Review:HeyMrsPotter says:
Hello, I'm here to review your entry for my challenge!

I really like the introduction to this, it was a really effective way of grabbing my attention. The quote was worked in effortlessly and suited the story perfectly.

You've written such a different side to Myrtle that I'd never even considered. I always thought she moaned because she enjoyed the attention it gained her but this really made me rethink that. The part about all of the things she'd never done and the lists that she made was really heartbreaking. I've really never thought about what her death meant she would miss out on until you wrote it and now I just feel so sad for her, so well done for that!

For your first attempt at angst I think you did an amazing job, I'd have never known if you hadn't said. The dark tone was set right from the start and continued perfectly throughout. I didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes either :)

The best stories are the ones that make you think and this absolutely did. Brilliant job, you should step out of your comfort zone more often :D thanks for entering and keep your eyes peeled for the results!

Author's Response: Hello! :)

I just saw the results and gushed for so long. Thank you! I'm really happy about it. Thank you SO much! :D For the place, and the challenge itself. Without this, I probably wouldn't have ventured out to write this story, which really posed a challenge to someone who hadn't written a full-on angst yet.

To be completely honest, I hadn't thought of Myrtle like this till now. Now, i too feel quite sorry for her and it makes me sad to think about all the things she missed out on.

Thank you so much for all the wonderful compliments! And for this challenge! And for the prize, of course! You're too sweet! :)

Thank you :D

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