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Review:Remus says:
Heya! Perelandra here from the forums! So sorry that I took forever, but life, you know. However, I'm here to read and review your story!

You know, I've never read any stories that 1) have to do with Peter as a main due to prejudiced I have towards him and 2) ones that deal with his betrayal. So I'm excited to read this!

which made it easy for Peter to feed little white lies to James and Sirius to sow suspicion and misdirect them. Remus was the perfect scapegoat; after all, he was no stranger to secrets, having a tremendous secret of his own, and Peter used that to his advantage.--those lines right there are fantastic. I tend to forget that Peter was smart in his own right. I mean, he was able to tag along with Sirius and James and fool them. The idea of Peter arousing the suspicions of James and Sirius towards Remus is not only fantastic but wish I had used myself! Hahaha! For me, its a very believable scenario in order for Peter to get away.

I absolutely love the exchange between Voldemort and well...there wasn't much of Peter talking. However, your Voldemort felt very much in character. Creepy, scary and very commanding. I like how he just assumes that Peter will join him.

The end to this was fantastic! Peter's remorse yet he even tries to blame this on Sirius! Of all people! Argh! Your Peter here doesn't make me feel bad for him but more angry towards a the man who turned out to be a coward.

The description and imagery to this is great. I was really able to picture everything in my head, which is something I like to do while I'm reading. The emotions Peter went through were rough but at the same time I still can't forgive him. Hahaha!

This was a great one-shot! Thank you for letting me read it! As much as I hate Peter, I think you did a fantastic job with the story.

Until next time

--Rosie

Author's Response: No worries on the delay - it was really nice of you to offer to review stuff! So thanks! ♥

I'm really glad Peter 's excuse seemed believable! It always made me so sad that the rest of them began to distrust Remus after years of being friends - but with Peter switching sides around that time, it seemed like a logical explanation.

I'm thrilled to hear that you think Voldemort was in character! I often worry about my portrayal of canon characters, and so it means a lot that a character as important as Voldemort was written well! And yes Voldemort is quite arrogant about his own abilities/power, so he thinks he can get anyone to join if he tries!

The part with him blaming it on Sirius - from what is described in the books it was very convincing to outside observers that Sirius had done the curse that killed all the Muggles when he went after Peter, and I thought Peter must have planned that out beforehand. Since it was Sirius' idea to switch secret-keepers, he was the logical one for Peter to blame, in his mind.

I'm really glad you enjoyed the story despite that you hate Peter! (I really don't like him either, which made this just that more interesting to write haha) Thank you for such a lovely and thoughtful review!


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